Week 12A

In class today I presented my designs and element collages to the class. The feedback I received included

• having the saber be the textline instead of hanging
• think about a possible highlight color so it is not so monochromatic
• including a fat footer with instructions and some other copy
• trying to find a way to include the flag within the design since that is what a lot of people think of

Once I talked to professor pannafino I am also trying to sketch and rework the initial page where the website starts. It was decided that I need to show the action to connect to the result of the spinning weapons above. So there needs to be a tossing figure somehow involved in the piece; its placement and look is being worked out for next class.