Week 9B

Today we finished up presentations and I showed the class the completed animation of the motion graphic. Overall I felt people liked it but I was able to receive some good feedback.

• The device section seemed to happen a little too fast
• I am going to go back in and slow it down so it can take up some of the visual rest that follows it.
• There may be a name mispronounced in the audio and it was felt that the information at the end should be spoken
• I plan to talk to the peer that I got to do the voiceover ASAP about these changes and hopefully he can rerecord it quickly
• The words fly in too fast during the discipline section
• after this feedback I am going to try to re address that whole section to make it work and read better, for example maybe start with all the words on the screen then highlight them and have them move towards the center than fade.

At the end of class we took some notes on code and received reading assignments.