Week 5A

Today in class we got into groups and discussed our logo sketches. My group felt overall mine worked well but may not speak to my adult audience. The suggestions I received including getting rid of the eyes and nose, to make it more of a silhouette, have the owl flying and overall take the sketches and morph them together to create a cohesive well designed, adult logo. This is what I will be working towards when I refine my sketches for next class.

The feedback that I received for my storyboard is that the beginning works well but I need to refine certain places throughout:

• the "physical spaces" map section
• the "actions and responses affect human behavior "section

mainly, then it was decided that it could end after the speakers section and that the last third was unnecessary so I plan to take pieces from that last section when I revamp the above mentioned sections. For next class I am working towards an illustrator version of the storyboard with the changes.